This week we wrote explanations. We got to choose what the topic was going to be about. I chose 'Life Cycle of a Butterfly'. Here is the start of my explanation. Click here to read the rest.
I like the detail in your explanation - it is full of information but because it is in your own words, it is not boring. I am glad I am not a caterpillar because they eat the egg they come from. It is good that I didn't have to eat the bag I was in while I was growing in my mum's tummy. You speak very clearly on your Youtube videos and use expression, making it interesting to listen to.
I like the detail in your explanation - it is full of information but because it is in your own words, it is not boring. I am glad I am not a caterpillar because they eat the egg they come from. It is good that I didn't have to eat the bag I was in while I was growing in my mum's tummy. You speak very clearly on your Youtube videos and use expression, making it interesting to listen to.
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