My name is Gabriel, and I am part of this year’s Summer Learning Journey team. I will be helping to comment on your amazing posts over the summer. It is such a wonderful experience to be able to read your blog. It’s great to see what you have done already!
Wow, great poem! You really got into the head of Neil Armstrong! Have you ever read about Neil before? Would you like to be an Astronaut one day?
I really like the metaphor you used about feeling like a balloon! Did you know that on the moon you weigh just 16% of what you weigh on earth?
If you are interested here is a link to some more awesome poem ideas:
Hi Regan!
ReplyDeleteMy name is Gabriel, and I am part of this year’s Summer Learning Journey team. I will be helping to comment on your amazing posts over the summer. It is such a wonderful experience to be able to read your blog. It’s great to see what you have done already!
Wow, great poem! You really got into the head of Neil Armstrong! Have you ever read about Neil before? Would you like to be an Astronaut one day?
I really like the metaphor you used about feeling like a balloon! Did you know that on the moon you weigh just 16% of what you weigh on earth?
If you are interested here is a link to some more awesome poem ideas:
https://www.google.com/url?q=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.poetry4kids.com%2Flessons%2Fpoetry-writing-lessons%2F&sa=D&sntz=1&usg=AFQjCNEnd9ZtEbSormeNq10mnIOq270-tw
Great use of images and colour! This really keeps us readers engaged with your writing :)
Keep up the great blogging work,
Gabe