I really enjoyed reading you story. You have really used your imagination on this one. I love the idea of a pot exploding on the stove. When you read the story starter you imagine all the really bad things that could happen. I can just imagine you running around trying to fix the hole in the wall and pretend that nothing has happened.
Great imagination on this one, well done.
Remember to go and check our other students blogs and leave a comment. This will earn you extra points for doing so. You could comment on Millah's blog!! Or Iris has just starting blogging you could check hers out.
Hi Reagan
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading you story. You have really used your imagination on this one.
I love the idea of a pot exploding on the stove. When you read the story starter you imagine all the really bad things that could happen.
I can just imagine you running around trying to fix the hole in the wall and pretend that nothing has happened.
Great imagination on this one, well done.
Remember to go and check our other students blogs and leave a comment. This will earn you extra points for doing so. You could comment on Millah's blog!! Or Iris has just starting blogging you could check hers out.
Until next time
Allie :)