Over the past 2 weeks Aimee and I have been working on an argument about animals in circus acts. I found this quite fun to do. I liked how we got to research some facts and then add them into our writing! Here is a link to another blog post of mine which shows what an argument should include.
Link to the argument
Hello Reagan,
ReplyDeleteIt is your favourite sister Millah here.
This is a good piece of writing as you have a strong opinion and you have lots of good arguments. I agree with you animals should not be in circuses and reading your writing convinced me even more.
Next time it would be great to choose a different font as it is quite hard to read.
Keep up the great work.
Millah