This week we had to write a diary entry for The Mines' Afire explaining about the explosion and the funeral. We had to write in the perspective of a brother/sister or Mum/Dad or son/daughters who's relative died in the explosion.
Bula Wow, Rea! I can't believe how you can now hook the reader in with your detailed writing. half a cup of cream - boy, you're not on a diet!!! I like how you have presented on what looks like really old faded paper. I enjoyed watching the video of you reading your diary entry. You use such wonderful expression when you read. You are a joy to listen to.
I look forward to reading your next piece of writing! Love Mum
Bula
ReplyDeleteWow, Rea! I can't believe how you can now hook the reader in with your detailed writing. half a cup of cream - boy, you're not on a diet!!! I like how you have presented on what looks like really old faded paper.
I enjoyed watching the video of you reading your diary entry. You use such wonderful expression when you read. You are a joy to listen to.
I look forward to reading your next piece of writing!
Love Mum