Wednesday, 6 March 2019

The Mines' Afire - Diary Entry

This week we had to write a diary entry for The Mines' Afire explaining about the explosion and the funeral. We had to write in the perspective of a brother/sister or Mum/Dad or son/daughters who's relative died in the explosion.

1 comment:

  1. Leaticia Lagan6 March 2019 at 13:20

    Bula
    Wow, Rea! I can't believe how you can now hook the reader in with your detailed writing. half a cup of cream - boy, you're not on a diet!!! I like how you have presented on what looks like really old faded paper.
    I enjoyed watching the video of you reading your diary entry. You use such wonderful expression when you read. You are a joy to listen to.

    I look forward to reading your next piece of writing!
    Love Mum

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Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.